After Reading Charles Sisson's 'Broadmead Brook' for C.H.S.
by David Wright
'Where in another century my mother
Had played and laboured.' There, for him, all was changed.
For me his lines recalled a Lowland valley
My forbears laboured in: with nothing changed
Bar hedgerows, grown to trees, and fallen stones
Marking a farm; and ruined Auchlewan
A ruin still. There once my mother played
And in another century. I recall
Walking with her some sixty years gone by
Beside its river to Pinclanty Mill,
She naming every field – for all had names –
Those bounded by the river known as 'homes'.
There, by the mill, long silenced, a sheep-pen
Shaped like a shield was pointed out to me:
'That was the cottage once, and that is where
My father and your grandfather was born.'
And when, long after, myself and old man,
I brought his great-granddaughter to that valley
I found no change bar decay: stones remained
Where they had fallen,; autumn stalked the leaves
And that was all. Even the curious field's
Contour, next to that sheepfold, kept its claim
To the name my mother gave and had been given,
Which in my turn I gave: 'The Coffin Home'.
Saturday, August 12, 2017
My mother gave and had been given
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how thought provoking the first four lines of Sisson's poem are!
ReplyDeleteO you haunting ghosts, I move towards you
Could I go over these flooded plains
It would not be to any Paradise
I came from none and I expect to find none...
for me, it begs the question - in terms of consciousness, why would anyone expect the distant future to be any different than the distant past? We have one life to work out what we have been a part of... and then we are recycled, full stop.
i think you've caught the spirit here ∞